Final Draft Reflection

I am very proud of how my revision piece turned out. I enjoyed the personal aspect I could put into this piece of work, and I am also glad that my piece could help ease new college students' fears upon entering college. My favorite aspect of my piece is the dramatic build up for the first day of class. The new scenery, the new environment, the thoughts and worrys all drawn out.... I swear you can almost hear my chattering teeth!